My Favorite Teacher
outline :
1. when and where I meet this teacher ?
2. who the teacher was and the subject he/she taught ?
3. why this teacher lesson were special ?
4. How this teacher influence me ?
I met this teacher when I was a senior high school student in SMAN 1 DOMPU. She is an English teacher that replace my old English teacher because my old English teacher was passed away when we are on the second semester on the second grade.
When I was a senior high school student, I joined scout extracurricular and she is one of my scout coach, so I know she since the first year of my senior high school. Her name is Ety Haerunnisa, but we usually called her "UNNI" she is not like a teacher that always dictate us, she more like a friend for us because she like our sister, she always make the class cheerful but still can manage the class so the class still continues.
I'm one of student that really like English even I can speak it well, but I have an interest on it. A way she teach us is so different from other because she made her lesson more funny than other way... this subject vary important for me because in the future English is really help us. And I don't know why in my classmate think English is a boring subject and really difficult for them but for me it's really made me happy and had a spirit in my school life.
Unni, the way I call her is my teacher,my friend,my sister and all she can be...as I said before she is my scout coach so I have really good relations with her. When I was a senior high school student, I'm not really good in religion but when I met her, she gave me a good lesson,she teach me more about religion,about life, about everything that I don't know and need to know as a 'Muslimah' or as a good human.
For me she is one of my important person in my life because she change me into a better person in life, I really love her as my family and now I really miss her, her jokes, and her lesson to me.
That's about my favorite teacher....if there are soe mistake please tell me and comment bellow...
That's about my favorite teacher....if there are soe mistake please tell me and comment bellow...


Owh I see. That maybe a reason why you can speak English bravery and clearly. That's good. Fah! There's no serious grammar error here. I like your article. Good job and keep writing!
ReplyDeleteThank you lula...
DeleteGood writing Ifahh. But, in my opinion it's better if you use v2 for "replace" because it was happened in the past right? PROUD OF YOU!
ReplyDeleteah yaa... I forgot it,thnak you aura...
DeleteYour article is very good, complex and exellent, goodjob ifa, of course you miss her right ?
ReplyDeleteof course I miss her so much...
DeleteI dont know why you use "..." in your sentence I think that is your expression. But it will be better if you dont use it. Overall thats good article. Good Job Ifah !!
ReplyDeleteI do really enjoy reading your writing, Fah. Keep it up!
ReplyDeletethank you manda..
DeleteWoahh, can’t get enough to read your blog. Can’t wait for the next blog, Iffah!
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion in sentence
“A way she teach us is so different ....” maybe it’ll better if replace “a” before word WAY to be “the”
yeah...thanks for the correction maya..
DeleteGreat job fah!! But there is a typo that I mef in "this subject vary importan". The vary should be written very... but overall are good, keep writtingg
ReplyDeleteGreat jobb ifah, your article is greatt๐๐๐
ReplyDeleteGreat job ifah
ReplyDeleteKeep practice
you've done a graet job fah
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ReplyDeleteoutline :
1. when and where I meet this teacher ?
2. who the teacher was and the subject he/she taught ?
3. why this teacher lesson were special ?
4. How this teacher influence me ?
I met this teacher when I was a senior high school student in SMAN 1 DOMPU. She is an English teacher that replaced my old English teacher because my old English teacher was passed away when we are on the second semester on the second grade.
When I was a senior high school student, I joined scout extracurricular and she is one of my scout coach, so I know she since the first year of my senior high school. Her name is Ety Haerunnisa, but we usually called her "UNNI" she is not like a teacher that always dictate us, she more like a friend for us because she like our sister, she always make the class cheerful but still can manage the class so the class still continues.
I'm one of student that really like English even I can speak it well, but I have an interest on it. The way she taught us is so different from other because she made her lesson more funny than other way... this subject very important for me because in the future English is really help us. And I don't know why in my classmate think English is a boring subject and really difficult for them but for me it's really made me happy and had a spirit in my school life.
Unni, the way I call her is my teacher,my friend,my sister and all she can be...as I said before she is my scout coach so I have really good relations with her. When I was a senior high school student, I'm not really good in religion but when I met her, she gave me a good lesson,she teach me more about religion,about life, about everything that I don't know and need to know as a 'Muslimah' or as a good human.
For me she is one of my important person in my life because she change me into a better person in life, I really love her as my family and now I really miss her, her jokes, and her lesson to me.
That's about my favorite teacher....if there are soe mistake please tell me and comment bellow...