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Outline
Problem
1. How many problems are discussed ?
↪ 2
2. What are they ?
↪ Awareness from each person about their surrounding
↪ Our bad habit to consumed plastic had destroyed other creatures
3. What expressions are used to introduce the problems ?
↪ The problem is awareness of each individual about their environment or surrounding.
↪ Another real problem is our habit to consumed a lot of plastic had destroyed other creatures.
4. How are the problem illustrated further ?
↪ On the middle of September, GREENPEACE had found 797 merk of plastic wast in Indonesian beach like Pandan Sari beach, Kuk Cituis beach and Mertasari beach, and a lot of these waste are a food and soft drinks package.
↪ The latest news is around 6 kg of plastic were found in the death body of whale's stomach in Wakatobi, Indonesia on 18th November 2018.
5. What result are discussed for each problem ?
↪ We as a people that life on this earth must have a big awareness about our environment and our surrounding , because if not us that care about our environment.
↪ Government need to provide strict rule and action about waste problem specially in the ocean and make some rules.
↪ for the company, they should reduce their plastic production and change their package material.Solution
1. How many solutions are given ?
↪ 32. What are they ?
↪ Have a big awareness about our environment and our surrounding.
↪ Provide strict rule and action about waste problem.
↪ Reduce plastic production and change the package material.
3. What different group of people does responsible for these solution ?
↪ People (us)
↪ Government
↪ Company
4. How would the solution be implemented ?
↪ Reduce our plastic consumption, take care about our trash, never throw it into the river and influence other people to do the right things.
↪ A strict rule for whom that throw their trash into the river.
↪ Use the biodegradable material for the package.
5. What the modal verb structures are used to make the suggestion ?
↪ Must
↪ Need to
↪ Should
For more than 50 years, global production and consumption of plastic have continued to rise. An estimate 299 million tons of plastic were produced in 2013, 4% increasing from 2012. About 8 million metric tons of plastic are thrown into the ocean annually, and every minutes one garbage truck of plastic is dumped into the ocean. And do you know guys ?, plastic is found in the ocean as far as 11 km deep, meaning synthetic fiber have contaminated even the most remote place in earth and the amount of plastic in the ocean set to increase tenfold by 2020.

The problem is awareness of each individual about their environment or surrounding. We can saw in our daily life, there are still a lot of people that throw their trash not in the right place,even that just a candy package,it have a big impact. There are still a lot of people that throw their household waste into the river, they never think that their trash will go to the ocean or they have know the impact but they just want the easiest way to do and just ignore what the impact of their activity. On the middle of September, GREENPEACE had found 797 merk of plastic wast in Indonesian beach like Pandan Sari beach, Kuk Cituis beach and Mertasari beach, and a lot of these waste are a food and soft drinks package.

Another real problem is our habit to consumed a lot of plastic had destroyed other creatures, like marine creatures. The ocean life had been destroy by our habit. Many marine organisms can’t distinguish common plastic items from food. Animals who eat plastic often starve because they can’t digest the plastic and it fills their stomachs, preventing them from eating real food. And if the marine organism just eat plastic so its mean that we, human is consumed or eat a plastic too, it also means that we aren't just destroyed the marine creature but also our life. The latest news is around 6 kg of plastic were found in the death body of whale's stomach in Wakatobi, Indonesia on 18th November 2018.
The solutions are we have to start with our self, we as a people that life on this earth must have a big awareness about our environment and out surrounding , because if not us that care about our environment, so who will care on it. Reduce our plastic consumption, take care about our trash, never throw it into the river and influence other people to do the right things. And also the government need to provide strict rule and action about waste problem specially in the ocean, for example a strict rule for whom that throw their trash into the river and for the company, they should reduce their plastic production and change their package material, like they can use the biodegradable material for the package.


Thats good article Ifaa...keep writing and spirit 💃
ReplyDeleteactually i still thinking about how can people do surfing while the water is polluted by plastic waste like your picture showed wkwkw... Good article Fah.. don't forget to look out your words, because there are a few typo of words😊😊
ReplyDeleteGreat article ifah keep spirit sist👍👍
ReplyDeleteGiving fact that close to reality is good
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Hi Ifah I think you have improving a lot in this article. I like to read it because it provides a lot of information. Good job!
ReplyDeleteAnyway on sentence "The ocean life had been destroy by our habit" the word destroy should be written as destroyed because you are using past perfect.
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